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Neo Arcadia discovers an ancient reploid of immense power. Could he be their ultimate defense against the inevitable return of an old hero?


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September 14th, 2007, 2:49 pm

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Reply Zmanwarrior, September 14th, 2007, 2:51 pm

I'm trying out what boredomcomics said. It does look cool. Except for the tension laser thingy.
Edit: I fixed the laser! Yay!

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User's Comments:

Reply Elda142, September 14th, 2007, 3:35 pm

I think it looks awesome. The tension lazer could have a little zappy zigzag instead of an oval though.

Reply Crystalman.EXE, September 14th, 2007, 3:39 pm

Personally, I'm a style freak. I make sure that my sprites are not only the same bitage, but the same style. Using 2x sprites, then putting in 1x pixels makes it look very distorted. There are other ways to change expressions.

Make the "RAAAGH!" on the light-shadowed panel.

Your comics are good, but crude. You need to work on flair, fluency, and style. Just like a written paper. It's hard to describe, but there are certain things that effect the "feel" of the comic, that can completely change how someone reads it.

Reply lopsidedmoose, March 10th, 2008, 4:23 pm

i agree with crystalman your comics were very awkward to read at the begging but now its superb. great job!

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